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Post by Kiriko-san on Aug 30, 2006 20:17:20 GMT -5
I need help! Oy'! H'lp me! The plot...I need muse, but I ran out and uh, I need help. Please staffie, give me suggestions. (Also you can play in a part) But , please, you m u s t h e l p m e ! ! ! ! ! ;D P L E A S E ! -thats all <3
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Post by Morbent Fel on Aug 30, 2006 20:22:01 GMT -5
A plot? Hmmm.... I liked the first one. What do you want it to be about? Do you want it to kind of follow the original plot line or be totally different?
Grrr... there are these loser foster girls at the library and the one is really loud. She's like "I can I use a computer?" and the librarian was like "No, you can't." and the girl was like "Why not?" and the librarian said "Because there are other people waiting." and then the girl looked at me and she was like "How longs she gonna be? She's always here." And I'm like "I can hear you y'know." So that made me a tad mad.
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Post by Kiriko-san on Aug 30, 2006 20:39:05 GMT -5
Haha. Bendito. Just have patience with these kind of people, they aren't considerate. And you did like the first one? It didn't make much sense...maybe we could go along the lines of that one, but we shoudl be clearer on what Im trying to portay here. I want war to go all over the friggin site. (heh) I like war (well on games , books, and anything fictionate, On real life UH UH!) Woops...am I making any sense? Whats wrong with meep? O.0 Im so tiiired, should I go to bed...? I dunnno... My bro is getting so pissed oof with me... He always wants to talk to his gf, why cant I have a day offf? WHYYYY!!! ? ...meep ish tired. Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep. [/center]
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Post by Azalea on Aug 31, 2006 12:27:28 GMT -5
Yo. Just noticed the topic. On the subject of plots, may I just get my thoughts orgainized and corrected? What I got out of the plot was that Tormenta, who was rudely kicked out of Heaven with the help of Torment and Razz, was wishing to get back into Heaven once he grew of an adult age. He ended up travelling to Temporal Shrines, finding the shrines that the land's named after. He also found the (dark?) magic of the shrines, and with the help of that he also made/created/found the first Aeon/Xereta/Artimis. From there, it told him about a war that was coming and the warnings of when it was to arrive. Is..that right? ; All I have to wonder is about if Tormenta is still alive, or is he distant relatives of Fiero and Lianne? oh. And Tormenta and Torment gets sortof..confusing if they both become main characters xD; This is said with lots of love of course ; And I was also wondering if an Archive/Old Post board could be made so I can put unactive threads at least two months (or just one?) there so everything's not so cluttered. When they start to be posted at again, they can be returned to their orginal spot.
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Post by Kiriko-san on Aug 31, 2006 17:26:47 GMT -5
That's a very good idea, you can do that! <3 (the archives, I mean. ) And...You did get the story right, and I was considering in making Lianne and Fiero, Tormenta's lineage... *so you caught me*shifty eyes* We can change the names, it wouldn't really make much of a difference, but if their so confusing then OK. What name should we change, and to what? [/center]
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Post by Azalea on Aug 31, 2006 17:43:15 GMT -5
If those two don't come up in the story again, (which could be an interesting secondary plot if we get though our main one or need something to spice it up...which comes as a doubt ) then it doesn't really matter. But for the heck of it, and my handy dandy evil name generator, let us choose between such names as Murmur Diriel Grave Buttercup. ... I'm leaning towards Murmur for some reason. (: And thanks about the archive board. I'll start looking for posts to move after the boards made.
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Post by Kiriko-san on Aug 31, 2006 17:56:26 GMT -5
Youse welcome// As for the names....I'm leaning to Diriel. Tis' very interesting. Hehe Sound evil but odd, and strangely coool. Hehe. In other words, me likey! Te-he. The characters coming back...? Sounds interesting! But that has to be later on in the plot.
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Post by Azalea on Aug 31, 2006 18:24:19 GMT -5
Diriel's swell too (: Not Buttercup? I was certain it would be a favourite. And jaja, later. No need to confuse anybody more than nesscary.
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Post by Morbent Fel on Aug 31, 2006 19:24:15 GMT -5
I like Buttercup. But don't rename Fiero, I like his name. And I finally got the spelling right. ;D Diriel's a sweet name... let's use it.
Hmm... we could also have a graphics request board. So we can see when there are requests instead of checking the other board all the time.
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Post by Kiriko-san on Sept 1, 2006 14:18:51 GMT -5
OKies. That board will be made then. And ya'll have the rights to your opinion. But Im sticking to Diriel. Buttercup reminds me too much of the PowerPuff Girls *laugh* Ill get to that board as soon as meep can k? --- Did they close up Forgettfully Pink, Morbent Fel?
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Post by Morbent Fel on Sept 2, 2006 14:00:43 GMT -5
I think so... cause its not there anymore I wish they hadn't though, if Sunny was active they could have got it active again. Ooo! Ooo! I have an idea for the plot. There could be 4 different bands that are all fighting for control of the Shrines and stuff. And then we could possibly get more humans involved and stuff.
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Post by Kiriko-san on Sept 4, 2006 10:17:17 GMT -5
Yeah, I want different creatres out in this RP, it's looking too much like a horse RPG and I was trying to avoid that. So yeah, maybe we can do the four band things , but have to make out their motives and figure out why the want to have it all for themselves, and whcihc are good and which are bad and if the have humans or equines, and ect. Get what I mean?
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Post by Morbent Fel on Sept 5, 2006 20:11:06 GMT -5
The humans were digging. Digging for a rare black ore found only under the Shrines. Their camps had been set up around the North Shrine, and the excavation had begun. They believed that the black ore would give them powerful magic that would make them rich. And they were willing to destroy the Shrines to find it.
The equines were at war.
... And thats as far as I got. I want to make something called 'The Black Core Project' and its about the humans (read 1st paragraph) and the equines who are trying to stop them. But all the equines are at war and must *gets cheesy* put aside their differences to stop the evil from destorying the shrines!
I'm so lame...
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Post by Morbent Fel on Sept 11, 2006 13:42:26 GMT -5
The flame hued stallion stood alone. His hooves were half buried under the sandy loam. The beast's crown was held high, and his eyes were a dark void, blazing with hate A slight breeze played though his crimson banners as labrums parted for the brujo to speak.
It has begun.
The soft vocals issued from his kissers only to fall upon empty air. THe sandy topo on which the stag stood would one day be soaked with blood. The blood of humans and equines. And in the midst of the carnage the fire painted stallion would stand alone. It was his destiny to be alone. It was the destiny of Fiero.
... it looked alot longer on paper.
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